Friday, April 19, 2013

Chairs and Stairs Poem and Paragraph

Walking down the stairs,
People walking in front of me really weren’t fair.
I try going up the stairs,
But all I could see on the ground was tiles squares.
To find that nobody cares,
That I needed a chair.
Finally I found a seat on the table right there,
Taking off my shoes to see my feet are bare.
I try asking someone to help me, just to declare.
I found another chair downstairs,
But the boy across from me glares.
He stole it like he didn't care,
I guess he wants to be a billionaire.
I look for a chair,
But I yelled "Where?!"
With my tears,
I found that there was one under the stairs.
I try not to make it disappear,
So I have to prepare,
A lot of interferes,
To not make it theirs.
I moved the chair,
But I was unaware,
So I fell down the stairs.
Nobody took the chair,
So people laughed and cheered.

Paragraph

I chose to write this rhyming poem because I like writing poems that rhyme. Even though it is a poem that doesn't make sense, I still think that it is a poem about me, when I took the elevator a month and I just started to go up the stairs last week. It was really tiring when I go up the stairs to home base because it is on the 3rd floor. Every time I get home, my older sisters always try to scare me when I'm in the basement so they could beat me up the stairs, but now that I can run, I can beat them. Most of the times, I don't really mind walking up the stairs so I don't complain anymore. :)

2 comments:

  1. I like how in you rhymed in your poem and it still made sense, I also liked your paragraph about your poem, because you connected to your poem.

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  2. Good job! I liked your poem a lot and it was more professional than what you used to do. I do agree that your poem doesn't make total sense, but it wasn't bad. I liked how you made your poem based off of your leg and how you felt like when you had crutches.

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